Wednesday, November 15, 2017

My poetic Writing

I have been learning about Poetic devices to help me make my ideas so the reader can feel them. What do you think I have used?
Leaves by Kirsty

Lots of leaves slowly waving side to side,
falling of the tall brown trees.

The pieces of the green grass
Are poking through the beautiful colourful leaves.

The leaves are curvy and pointy
like our fingers spread out wide.

The autumn leaves are brown and yellow.
Dead Leaves on the damp squishy ground.

The leaves are crunchy and crumbly under my feet
like chips when I eat them.

CRUNCH CRUNCH!

Gone a while...but now I'm back - Greedy Cat narrative

I have been learning about writing a narrative story and organising my ideas so it makes a better story.