Thursday, March 7, 2019

My Hero



Writing to explain:

Research a Hero,
Sexy paragraph - explain why they are a hero to you.  What makes you connect with them, how does your identity and theirs have any connections - which threads


Introduction vmpernana
Statement: Where you start with a topic sentence or main idea you will discuss.
Explanation: Where you explain your points and ideas.
eXample: Where you give (3) examples to prove and further support your point. Image result for vampirina
                 (Makes up the body of your essay, each is a paragraph! )
You add: Your opinion of what you are talking about, to conclude your paragraph.



Write here:  Vampirina lives with her parent in the Transylvania, Vampirina becomes the new kid
on the block, she makes new friends with Poppy and Bridget.
Vampirina  she is a bat  she can fly Puppy and  Westnet are friends forever.
Vampirina helps people out when they are in trouble. She helps people by saving their lives.

She is like me because she is cool and brave. She is awesome and I am awesome at school.
She helps people and I help people too. She has friends and I do too.

I would like to know her and be her friend too.





Tuesday, July 24, 2018

My Vanuatu Adventure

Before  the   holidays  I went to vanuatu. With the all  famly  i  padl broding  and  i  got 2 lizs  on  my  hat   and my shor  i  lik  it and i  was not  skert fo  it.

Tuesday, June 12, 2018

My baking with Storm

WALA: food and how to make things by using ingredients and following a recipe. Storm and I chose Buttery brown sugar biscuits.

Don't Eat Me! - my plate face

I read the poem Don't Eat Me! and then I had to make my own plate face with food I have for tea.  I used my plate face to help me write my version of the peomm.
I used Seesaw to take a phto and record it on.


Wednesday, November 15, 2017

My poetic Writing

I have been learning about Poetic devices to help me make my ideas so the reader can feel them. What do you think I have used?
Leaves by Kirsty

Lots of leaves slowly waving side to side,
falling of the tall brown trees.

The pieces of the green grass
Are poking through the beautiful colourful leaves.

The leaves are curvy and pointy
like our fingers spread out wide.

The autumn leaves are brown and yellow.
Dead Leaves on the damp squishy ground.

The leaves are crunchy and crumbly under my feet
like chips when I eat them.

CRUNCH CRUNCH!

Gone a while...but now I'm back - Greedy Cat narrative

I have been learning about writing a narrative story and organising my ideas so it makes a better story.


Friday, November 11, 2016

Kirsty's Technology Trip

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On Monday I went to  Grey High for a technology visit. Joela drove me to the technology. I took photos inside of  the the cooking room, the canteen  and the teachers. I  met Mrs Connally and Mr Keenan and Mrs Gilliland.